In His Grip

IN HIS GRIP

My heart had come to prefer
Being held by another.
It felt safe there.
Secure.
In its place
I held the heart of the other.

Until the day
My heart was handed back to me.
Broken.
Pieces hanging by a thread.

How can I hold the pieces
Of my broken heart
While the other’s
Still beats within me?

There’s only One
Whose grip is more secure than mine.
It’s into His incomparable hands
I must give
Both hearts.

2011-06-16
P. Wanken

Written for Three Word Wednesday prompt: grip, prefer, thread; and Writer’s Island Prompt: incomparable.

33 comments

    1. Thanks for stopping by, Lindsey…your visit and your comments are appreciated…I’m so glad you found something here with which you can relate. ~Paula

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    1. Thank you so much for such kind words….I’ve just been to your site and the depth of emotion is there, as well! We all write differently…which is a very good and necessary thing. Thanks again. ~Paula

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  1. At least ‘you’ have your heart back..to be repaired..with help..it is always better to have something in pieces rather than to lose it all together..Jae

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    1. Jae ~ Thanks, as always, for taking the time to leave me a comment! I always appreciate it!! And yes, better to have pieces than to lose it all together! ~ Paula

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  2. Will the hurt or the ink dry up first. Another powerful piece, Paula. I look forward to, and dread, the day your poetry leads off into a different direction. What you write now is so primal, yet beautiful. If only happiness could shine another light on your talent. Just keep writing.

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    1. Mike, your words brought tears to my eyes. The kind of tears that soothe. Like a balm. You have been such a great encouragement to me in this writing process. Thank you. ~Paula

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    1. Catie: Thank you for stopping by my site, I hope you’ll be back. And thank you for your comments…”sublime”…wow. I’m blessed to know you found something here that moved you. ~Paula

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  3. Powerful words. There’s something sad about the poem, but I love how it ends with the comfort God offers us. Handing our life over to him is difficult, but in the end, very much worth it. Thank you for sharing such a beautiful piece.

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    1. mitu: Thank you so much for your kind words…I am glad you found something here that you enjoyed. I hope you’ll come by for another visit. ~Paula

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  4. Happy Father’s Day to Dads in your family,
    You write amazing poetry.
    Come join poets rally week 46 today.
    Cheers…
    Blessings fly your way!
    xoxox

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  5. love it.

    Please Check out short story slam week 5,

    write a poem or a story based on the image, link to our week 5 collection of short stories, and have fun!
    Bless your day!
    Hope to see you in,
    Keep your creative juice running,
    BEST!
    xoxox

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