luminous full moon ~
an omen predicting some
erratic actions
2011-06-01
P. Wanken
This was written for Three Word Wednesday prompt: erratic, luminous, omen. I read the prompt very early this morning and had these three words bouncing around in my head all day! Now it’s 10 p.m. and I’ve finally gotten the opportunity to sit down to write…and it was these three simple lines that burst out of me like they’d been caged up all day. I was not anticipating a haiku, it’s just what happened! Now I get to go read what words burst forth from all of my poetry friends responding to this prompt!
echoes from the silence 
Paula,
I really like your poem. It flows well, and it uses the three words just right. Using them in a haiku is even harder, since you only have three lines. Good job!
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Thank you, Gordon…I do tend to be one of fewer words…so the haiku seems a good fit for me at times. But I really thought this was going to be a longer write, this time. Glad you liked it. 🙂 ~Paula
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I like it – seems like we were on the same wavelength.
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Yes–it seems we were! ~Paula
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The best things happen like that! The spirit of a full moon gets inside you and magic happens..jae
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I’ve really been drawn to the moon…I’m sure there will be more moon poems from me! ~Paula
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truly beautiful
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Thank you, Sheilagh!
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Aye, this goes well with the photo in your blog header; however, I don’t see you participating in any erratic actions. You are much too stable.
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Ah, but Mike…I didn’t say the erratic actions were mine! 😉
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Inspired! I’m still waiting for mine to drop in…
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Thanks, Viv!
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We were definitely on similar idea paths. You did well.
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Thanks! 🙂
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Foreshadowing of sorts…
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Good one.
But a luminous omen should sway away the erratic actions.
~Harsha
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Nice the idea of a full moon bringing out another side of ourselves has always intrigued me
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