A MOMENT WITH MONET
(a shadorma)
morning light
shimmers on the sea;
surrounded
by blue hues
they will journey together:
father, son, and sun
2012-08-10
P. Wanken
Inspired by a prompt at dVerse Poets Pub. The exercise was actually to use the mindset of the impressionist painters, who used “broad strokes” to convey a particular moment in time. They didn’t take the time to capture all the details. Instead they gave an “impression” of the moment by quickly capturing the mood in the broad strokes technique. The folks at dVerse used the above image as an example of an impressionistic painting (this one, by Monet). The exercise wasn’t to use the image as a prompt. We were supposed to find our own subject and write as an impressionist would paint. However, I was so captivated by this image that the above shadorma came out in a matter of about two minutes. I hope the folks at dVerse won’t mind. 😉 Click on their name (above) to go to their prompt and to read “impressionistic poems.”
I’m also posting this to “100 Days of Summer” for Day 37.
it is good doing these journeys together…speaks to me of much more than just traveling…
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Thanks for coming by, Claudia…and for your thoughts. 🙂
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Your words capture the mood of the piece just beautifully, Paula.
Marie Elena
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Thanks, Marie.
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nice…i like the way you set this up…the last two lines really expand and add story to your description…
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Thanks, Brian — the last couple lines were the first in my head for this one. ~Paula
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ummmm like this one, very very nice:)
Do NOT feel as you have to return comment… we are all spending so much time commenting we don’t have enough time to be creative 🙂
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Thank you, Len! I cannot NOT comment…I’m always so encouraged when ANYone leaves a note that I want to at least acknowledge with a “thank you.” 🙂
(Now…on to being creative…)
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🙂
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Georgeous painting and poem.
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Thank you, ViV, regarding the poem, anyway. If I happen to bump into Mr. Monet, I’ll pass along your kind words! 😉 (It IS a gorgeous painting, isn’t it!?)
*hugs*
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This is perfect! I love impressionist paintings, especially Monet–two minutes? You are amazing 🙂
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Thank you, Sara. It was a great painting to use as a springboard. As for “two minutes” — sometimes the words just jump onto the page. 🙂
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Lovely…nice interpretation 🙂
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Thank you so much, PL. I appreciate your visit and your kind words.
~ Paula
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