UNEXTINGUISHED FLAME
My day closes as it began. As a lit
candle, I write of the love that
burns in my heart. Tears drop
at the memory of what we
both had, and lost, as this relationship
ends.
2011-07-04
P. Wanken
Written for Carry On Tuesday’s prompt to write a poem using a part or all of the first line of Edna St. Vincents poem First Fig: “My candle burns at both ends.”
I’ ve been there before. Wonderfully written.
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Thank you, Isabel. 🙂
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A strong poem that reflects reality and truth!
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Thanks, Mary…as always, I appreciate your feedback. ~Paula
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A candle makes a perfect symbol of the falling tear. Great use of the prompt.
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Thanks, Nara! I appreciate your visit and your comment! 🙂 ~Paula
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Great write!
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Thanks, Becca!
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Stunning – powerful. 🙂
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Thanks, Jo. So much!
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Way to work a prompt, PW. Deft.
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Ron! Thanks for stopping by…and for your words. Appreciated!! 🙂 ~PW
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enjoyable read
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Thanks, Whitesnake! 🙂
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Paula, this is strong work. I love the prompt and what you did with the words. As a candle who is often “lit at both ends,” I applaud you! Amy
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Thanks, Amy — that means a lot! ~Paula
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