MUSIC BOX MEMORIES
So
many
memories,
hidden treasures
~ swirling and twirling ~
daydreamer’s dance
comforts and
pleases
me.
2012-09-06
P. Wanken
Written in response to Musical Notes Prompt #5 (Frank Mills’ “Music Box Dancer”), Poetic Asides Prompt #191 (write a memory poem), and posted for Day 62 at “100 Days of Summer” on Facebook.
echoes from the silence 
Love the shape of your poem Paula, emphasizes the whirling and twirling of memory and the dancer. So many of us had one of those jewelry boxes with the music and the ballerina. Pleasant memories,
Elizabeth
http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/
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Thanks, Elizabeth. I had a music box that not only holds special memories because of its music, but it also held some of my prized treasures. 🙂
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Oh I loved my music box!! What a wonderful memory and poem–very fun to make it a concrete poem too. Love it!!
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Thanks, Sara. 🙂 There was no way it was going to look like a real person, but at least it gets “the point” across! 😉
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and these words look the same .. twirling and swirling between your fingers 🙂
Lovely !
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Thank you, LadyN. 🙂
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A pretty poem, Paula – to read and just to look at!
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😀 Thanks, ViV! 🙂
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