HER LASTING IMPRESSION
(a shadorma)
Everywhere
he looks, he sees her…
the backs of
his eyelids,
in midnight shadows, and etched
in frosted windows.
2015-09-21
P. Wanken
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echoes from the silence 
I like this a lot.. there are those people who are just imprinted, and yes on the back of our eyelids. What a longing in a sentiment like that.
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Yes – I felt the longing when writing it. Glad that came across.
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She certainly made an impression. she must be special indeed.
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Thanks, Keith!
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I think he might be in love with her
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Yes, perhaps so!
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Surreally ethereal , thanks
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Ooo. I like the comment! “surreally ethereal” ! 🙂
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Beautifully handled, technically. Well done.
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Thank you!
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Beautiful…
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Thank you, Tess…and thank you for the myriad of inspiring prompts!! Ekphrastic poetry has become one of my favorite things!
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Wow! I loved this. It describes exactly what it’s like to be in love, where every waking moment is laced with that person. Great job. 🙂
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Thank you, Elena — glad you enjoyed it!
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I think it’s time to say hello!
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heehee – I think so!
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So beautiful! I really like this —it’s etched in my mind 🙂
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Thank you, Sara. Glad you liked it! (The prompt became etched in my mind…I just HAD to use it to write a poem!)
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I can feel the image burning in the back of the eyes!
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When my words can evoke a feeling — wow, thank you.
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So beautiful. You shadorma shaman. 🙂
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🙂 thank you, de…
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This is wonderful, Paula.
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