RAINDROP LULLABY
Snuggled into bed, rain
falling gently – no thunder, just peace-
ful cascades on a night not so warm;
slowly exhaling – content and warm,
I’m lulled by rain,
each drop filling me with peace;
I float away to dream of warm
sunny beaches where peace-
filled waves sound like rain.
Warm rain drops peace.
2012-01-31
P. Wanken
Written for Poetic Asides “form challenge: tritina.” For more information on the form and the challenge, click here.
UPDATE:
ugh…thought I had the form down, but just realized I didn’t quite get it. 😦
TAKE TWO:
RAINDROP LULLABY
Snuggled into bed, rain
falling gently – no thunder, just peace-
ful cascades on a night not so warm;
slowly exhaling – content and warm,
I’m lulled by rain,
each drop filling me with peace;
I float off to peace-
filled dreams to bask in warm
sunshine, where waves sound like rain
Warm rain drops peace.