buoyed by dreams
anchored in reality
she awaits her ship
2016-2-23
P. Wanken
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2016-2-23
P. Wanken
echoes from the silence 
Love this. Bobbing along…
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Thanks — glad you liked it. 🙂
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I love hopeful poems. Lovely.
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I’m glad it reads as hopeful. Thanks.
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That is a good place to be!
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I don’t know about the “waiting” part — but the combination of dreaming and reality? Yes. 🙂
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There’s some motion to the waiting…I agree with, de.
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Motion. Like….pacing!? 😉
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Beautiful. Love the brevity, the simplicity, the double meaning in the last line 🙂
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Thank you–glad you liked it, and thanks for the comments.
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Oh yes, very nice. Goes well with the image. Love the use of ‘buoyed’.
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Thanks, margo. I don’t write haiku very often because I don’t ever believe they’re “true haiku” (something I’ll most likely never master)…but those phrases (including the use of “buoyed”) just needed to be left alone rather than wordsmithed into a shadorma. 🙂
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