PIRATE’S PRINCESS
No longer
anchored, her heart sang
as she stood
firmly on
shore’s edge; his ship slipped into
hazy horizon.
2016-02-08
P. Wanken
PIRATE’S PRINCESS
No longer
anchored, her heart sang
as she stood
firmly on
shore’s edge; his ship slipped into
hazy horizon.
2016-02-08
P. Wanken
Big smile from this. Loved!
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Aw, thanks, Mosk!! 🙂
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Love it! No longer anchored 🙂
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Thanks, Sara!! Glad you enjoyed it! 🙂
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I am a bit slow sometimes but she sound like she is happy at his departure, haha.
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That is how I saw her…standing pretty firmly. And happy.
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Oh ok, good I did not err :).
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Free at last.
=)
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Thanks for stopping by! 🙂
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Yep, freedom and a sharp harpoon all ways saves the day! Nice shadorma, Paula. Do you write many? 😉
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Shadorma? What’s a shadorma!?
Thanks, Walt! 🙂
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Well, whatever it is, you’re in true form! 😀
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😉 …thanks, Walt!
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I’m trying my hand at Tricube, as well…another easy form for me to remember that doesn’t require rhyming or meter!
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Oh yeah.. better free from those clingy sailors… 🙂 maybe the ship really sinks too.
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Thanks for visiting! (and yes…I’d contemplated writing of a sunken ship) 🙂
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I like the sentiment, and the form.So now I have learnt a new poetic form. Unlike Walt, I wouldn’t recognise it, so need to be told 🙂
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Walt knows that it’s my “go to” form! Glad you stopped by…thanks!
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You do this form so well. Lovely poem, Paula.
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Thanks, Misky…I should branch out more, but I do so easily fall back to it!
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Such a nice poem! Loved it thoroughly! ☺
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Thank you! So glad you enjoyed it!! 🙂
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Welcome! Hope you too enjoy my posts!☺☺
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