Kristallnacht Dreams

abandoned - margo roby promptKRISTALLNACHT DREAMS

My home was
abandoned the night
hell broke loose—
not my dreams.
Concentrating on them helped
me survive the camp.

I dreamed of
having a baby
of my own.
Not a doll,
but being a grown woman.
Married. With children.

Years passed…I
would think about the
doll I had
left behind,
wondering if anyone
found her and loved her.

Or did they
hate the baby doll
as much as
they hated
the Jew who’d loved her first? Would
I ever be loved?

Now, watching
my granddaughter with
her baby
girl, I am
crystal clear on this: never
abandon your dreams.

2016-01-26
P. Wanken

Shared at Margo’s Wordgathering

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14 comments

    1. Thanks, ViV! ❤
      Between "abandon" being the word given with the image, and the image itself…hard not to feel the depth of sadness. I kept up with stanzas of shadormas until I could get to a happier place!! 🙂

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  1. The way you chose to break up the lines in the end causes for a double meaning reading…”my granddaughter with her baby girl,” and, “girl, I am crystal clear on this: never abandon your dreams.” Neat! I’m not sure if that was intentional but I love it! Good to see you, Paula! ((hugs))

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    1. Kim–thanks for stopping by, and for leaving the comment about my poem “hitting home”. I’m always grateful to know my words connect with others. As for the “pun” — wordplay is a favorite of mine. So…thanks! 🙂

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