IT’S ALL IN MY HEAD
I’m alone
in this space,
this place
where thoughts
collide
with reality.
Whispers of hope
are crowded out
by shouts
of disappointment
and failure.
My cries go unheard;
tears, undried.
I’m all alone
in this space.
2015-06-22
P. Wanken
That is so sad.
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Well…the assignment was to create a mood. Mission accomplished. ❤
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Wow , you certainly created a mood of desolation, loneliness. Great poem. Now, cheer up, girl! 🙂
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Thanks for your feedback. As for cheer — all in due time, I suppose! Muah.
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Success indeed. It would bum me out to think that this is anything more than a mere writing assignment…
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Well, you know how it goes…life and art, and all. ❤
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Wow. You certainly nailed it, Paula. (And know that you are loved!!!)
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Marie! Thanks for stopping by. Love you, too! ❤
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This seems sad, lonely, and a little frightening. Well done!
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Thanks for stopping by, Candy…and for your comments!
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