WAKING UP IS HARD TO DO
(a shadorma)
I can fill
days with busyness;
evenings,
with TV.
It’s when I first wake up that
I think you’re still there.
2013-07-16
P. Wanken
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echoes from the silence 
Guess that getting out of bed line sparked your muse too 😉 The shadorma queen reigns! 🙂
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Um…getting out of bed, line??
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Rewritten as a Cinquain…
WAKING UP IS HARD TO DO
Busy
days distract me;
nights filled with TV. It’s
when I wake up that I think you’re
still there.
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In our emails 😉 The cinquain works really well too!
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Ah, yes…I was trying to think of a prompt site that spoke of getting out of bed! LOL (And…I had not written the cinquain form, before…so I thought perhaps I’d start this way, with an adaptation. It’s another great “short form” with rules I can remember!) *hugs*
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Aaaaah. Bless.
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Thank you, Misky. ❤
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I definitely think you’re onto something here, another short form to rock 🙂 Hugs ❤
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Yes — I *do* love the short forms! 🙂
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