Waking Up Is Hard To Do

 

WAKING UP IS HARD TO DO
(a shadorma)

I can fill
days with busyness;
evenings,
with TV.
It’s when I first wake up that
I think you’re still there.

2013-07-16
P. Wanken
 

 

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9 comments

  1. Rewritten as a Cinquain…

    WAKING UP IS HARD TO DO

    Busy
    days distract me;
    nights filled with TV. It’s
    when I wake up that I think you’re
    still there.

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    1. Ah, yes…I was trying to think of a prompt site that spoke of getting out of bed! LOL (And…I had not written the cinquain form, before…so I thought perhaps I’d start this way, with an adaptation. It’s another great “short form” with rules I can remember!) *hugs*

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