Sandcastle Senryu

the life of my dreams
has been washed away like a
castle in the sand

P. Wanken


Written for Poetic Bloomings “Life is a Beach” – Day 7: Sandcastles.



    1. I’ve always felt a sadness about sandcastles being washed away…and the prompt explained the euphemsim of sandcastles as big dreams. So…I felt like the only direction I could end up going with my poem was toward the sadness of it all.

      Thanks for stopping by, McGuffy.


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