Miscalculations

 

MISCALCULATIONS

More
than once
she believed
she found the one:
the man of her dreams.
Finally! Her “plus one!”
Yet, time and again, they just
did not add up. Relationships
turned out positively negative,
one miscalculation after the next.

2013-04-05
P. Wanken

Written for Poetic Asides April Poem-A-Day Challenge #5: Plus. Posted for day 34 in 100 Days of Spring – 2013.

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11 comments

  1. Perfect. A gem, this. More than once found the one, indeed. Plus one. The concept, the language, the structure: not a (heh heh) single word wasted. In sum: this rocks, totally.

    I’m bowing.

    Like

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