RIVER OF LIFE
Soft as a sigh,
the milky sky
lightens,
my visibility
hidden
by the rushes,
where I watch.
And listen.
Tragic events
unfolded,
blasting through
heart and home,
leading me
to today…
itching
to retrieve
my baby boy
who floats atop
the glassy slick
of the Nile.
2012-12-17
P. Wanken
Inspired by The Sunday Whirl’s Prompt #87: top, milky, glassy, unfolded, itch, blast, rushes, slicks, listen, sigh, lighten, tragic, and visibility; and posted on Day #44 for the “100 Days of Fall/Winter 2012” challenge.
Oh that was beautiful!
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Thank you! So glad you enjoyed it. 🙂
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Reblogged this on maesilverwrites and commented:
Beautiful poetry!
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…thanks for that!
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Beautifully written.
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Thanks, McGuffy! I appreciate that. 🙂
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Loved the perspective – truly novel – Merry Christmas My Friend.
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Thanks, Mosk! I’m glad you liked it. Merry Christmas to you, too! ❤
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