A MESS FROM A BOTTLE
(a shadorma)
She watched her
hero disappear.
It wasn’t
overnight;
the villain emerged slowly…
one shot at a time.
2012-11-27
P. Wanken
Inspired by
Poetic Asides PAD Challenge prompt #27:
Two-fer-Tuesday: “Hero / Villain”
also posted as Day #24 for the “100 Days of Fall/Winter 2012” challenge.
Wow! Kick ass good! This packs a punch! Great!
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Wow, indeed — thanks for that, Mosk. It means a lot.
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Another winner from the reigning queen of Shadorma! Love that title 🙂
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Thank you, as always, Sara. You’re such an encouragement! And…glad you liked the title! 🙂
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Ladies & Gentlemen, THIS is poetry.
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Ron. You’re too kind. ❤
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such power in a few short lines. brilliantly done. And love this prompt!
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Thank you, so much!
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Wow! Love this!!
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Thank you, Linda! ❤
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An excellent take on this prompt, Paula — love it! 🙂
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Thanks, Pamela! Glad you enjoyed it. 🙂
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