I’m Right Here

 

 

I’M RIGHT HERE
(a shadorma)

When he’s gone
there’s an empty space
in the room.
While I wait
for his return, he remains
closerthanthisclose.

2012-11-09
P. Wanken

 

Inspired by
Poetic Asides PAD Challenge prompt #9:
“When he’s gone.”
and posted as Day #6 for the “100 Days of Fall/Winter 2012” challenge.

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8 comments

  1. Don’t think for one minute that I haven’t been watching you, PW, and been favorably impressed–esp with this latest series, and esp with this latest piece, and esp with its closing line.
    While I always pine for My Beloved Sandra whenever she travels, I’m not convinced she shares that same sense you express so excellently here when I’m away.
    Well done.

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    1. Ron. you always bless me with your kindness, and always seem just to know when I need it. Your support — from the very beginning — has been truly appreciated!

      I’m glad you were able to capture the fullness of the sense I was writing about…as for your Beloved…I’ll bet she does. 😉

      Grateful,
      PW

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