AN ALTAR’d STATE
(a shadorma)
Alone I
stand, looking right…left;
wondering
what happened.
How could I have been so wrong
about Mister Right?
2012-11-06
P. Wanken
Inspired by
Poetic Asides PAD Challenge prompt #6:
“Left and/or Right”
and posted as Day #3 for the “100 Days of Fall/Winter 2012” challenge.
echoes from the silence 
Love the use of the ellipses here, Paula. The implication can be seen as “Alone I stand, left.”
Wonderful. Great take on the prompt.
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Thanks for noticing that, De. I made that edit between posting on PA and posting here. 🙂
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Brilliant! Could have been a sequel to “I’ll altar him.”
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Aww…thank you, ViV!
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Paula, this is great! Love your wordplay 🙂
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🙂 Thanks, my friend!
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