VIGILANT
With the tenderness of an angel
whose prayers are as constant as breathing
and the determination of an eagle
that flaps her wings over the water that holds her prey,
she empties herself of all ambivalence, fear, and doubt,
filling herself with all that is pure and holy;
the enemy, dazed, scurries from her presence,
her words rise as incense to the heavens.
2012-09-30
P. Wanken
Inspired by The Sunday Whirl’s Prompt #76: dazed, incense, ambivalence, empties, holy, scurries, breathing, fear, flaps, prayers, water, and tenderness. Also posted for Day 87 at “100 Days of Summer” — click here to go to their Facebook page.
This is lovely, Paula… I especially like the ending.
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Thank you, Laurie. 🙂
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Breathtaking. So beautiful
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Thank you, ViV. ❤
*hugs*
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Paula, wow. So powerful. I love what you’ve done with ambivalence – and “flaps” is so strong here; I like how you’ve used it, such a great image. The tenderness and the determination – such a great balance that leaves no room for ambivalence. Thank you.
Richard
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Thanks for that feedback, Richard. Truly, I am grateful.
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Love where you took these words. You could just as easily be speaking of the poet as a prayerful supplicant.
Elizabeth
http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/
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🙂 Thank you, Elizabeth…glad you enjoyed it.
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…and Elizabeth, I’m glad you took it as such. That was really my intent. The underlying inspiration for this poem is my vigil of prayer for a friend. ❤
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very beautiful
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Thank you so much, Len. ❤
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Stunning. I really love this one.
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Aw, thanks Misky…glad you liked it. 🙂
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Oh, man, Paula. That’s just gorgeous. Goodness. And what an example.
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Thank you, De. Glad you liked it. ❤
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ooooo! I love how your strung all these beautiful words together 🙂 Makes my heart happy
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I love that I made you’re heart happy!! 🙂 Thanks, Sara…THAT makes MY heart happy!! ❤ 🙂
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I needed something beautiful this morning. Thanks Paula.
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Aw, thanks, Brenda! 🙂
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