ON THE LEVEL, WAS HE?
dis
com
bob
ulated, was she
t o r n a p a r t
affairs
of the heart…
…led to ex-
pectations br ok en
and free-
dumb?
2012-08-29
P. Wanken
Inspired by Three Word Wednesday: affair, expectation, free; as well as “100 Days of Summer” theme expression: “on the level.” Click here to go to their Facebook page. (Posted as Day 56)
echoes from the silence 
I love that word discombobulated, and the layout of the poem is kind of onomatopoeic.
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I like that! 🙂 Thanks for stopping by, ViV! *hugs*
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Well you don’t have to use that word discombobulated ever again…once in a lifetime is enough! I loved the implications in the word ‘freedumb’.
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LOL — I love the word too much to never use it again, Robin. 🙂 Thanks for the comment regarding my final word. 😉
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the layout and discombobulated are very satisfying to read..i love the word..sums up just a smidgen of untogetherness..jae (my spell checker is scratching it’s head) 😉
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LOL re: your spell checker! Thanks for coming by, Jae…and for your feedback.
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love what you did this! the disjointed letters matched the emotions…
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Thanks, 4joy! That was what I was going for!
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Paula you really outdid yourself with this one! The wordplay, the br o ken word, everything-amazing
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Thank you, Sara. It was a bit outside my usual “combobulated” self. 😉
~Paula
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When you step outside the box, you come out swinging 🙂
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😀 Thanks, my friend.
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Discombobulated?!! Just wickedly good.
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Thank you, Ritva! 😀
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I love this take on the prompt! The form fits well.
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Thank you so much!
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Oh yeah! Perfectly captured! Nice one, Paula! 🙂
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I generally don’t do the whole “discombobulated” form…but this one begged for it.
Thanks!! 🙂
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