TWO SLICES OF LATE SUMMER PI(KU)
sun’s rays, still
warm;
yet different
shadows shift
with
passing of time
2012-08-17
P. Wanken
In a serendipitous moment, I logged in to dVerse Poets Pub today (8-18) to find the prompt to be about summer. I shall link this poem there.
Like the tree shadows goes perfect with your verse, very nice indeed soothing and relaxing:)
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Thanks, Len! I was glad I found that picture. 🙂
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Piku is the ideal form to present such a topic. The shadows of late summer have a special feel to them. We are enjoying a few days of summer here, too.
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Glad you’re getting to enjoy some “summer” days before summer ends! 🙂 Thanks for stopping in, ViV! *HUGS*
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I love the subtle intensity of summer’s evening sun. Such a welcoming relief. 🙂
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Thanks for stopping by! 🙂
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So very true. There is something ‘different’ indeed about the late summer sun! A nice write here.
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Thanks for your feedback, Mary. 🙂
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nice…i like the different line, it is…i find comfort in just watching those shadows change…
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Thanks. I appreciate your visit. 🙂
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What a pretty photo and poem. Very simple and yet lovely cadence and observations too. k.
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Thanks for the great prompt, even though I was ahead a few hours and wrote about summer. Serendipity, indeed. I appreciate your feedback!
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it’s the shifting of shadows that fascinates me much in the changing seasons..well captured and great pic as well..was wondering how one of the impressionists had painted the scene
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Thanks for your visit and your thoughts, Claudia. I was glad I found a picture to go with my words. 🙂
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Good fusion of words and image
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Thank you, John. I appreciate that feedback. I’ve used pictures a few time with my poems, but have done more of it lately. I was pleased to find this picture.
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Perfect description of summer’s end. Thank you.
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Thank YOU, ds. 🙂
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A beautiful write–the subtleties of change, people don’t always notice those shadows shifting 🙂
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Thank you, Sara. ❤
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