CHANGE OF PLANS
(a shadorma)
I have stayed
on the beaten path
for too long
without much
substance; internal pressures
nudge me back in place.
2012-08-16
P. Wanken
Inspired by two prompts:
Three Word Wednesday (8/15/2012): beat, pressure, and substance; and Poetic Asides #188: to write a “change of plans” poem.
very nice π
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Thanks, Len! π
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Great use of the three words! Sometimes we have to venture off the beaten path π
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Thanks, Sara! π I played with a couple ideas for the 3 words, but then this fell together. Love it when that happens.
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oh. exquisite, makes me pause.
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π “exquisite” — I’ll take it! Thanks!!!
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Sometimes new paths are good to shift things inside and out..your words seem very solid..perhaps like the choice? Jae
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Thank you so much for your feedback, Jae Rose! Yes, indeed…new paths lead to new things.
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