Betrayed By A Dream

 

BETRAYED BY A DREAM

There are no flowers and hearts
or satin, lace and happily-ever-afters.
I walk through life alone,
betrayed by a dream.

2012-07-22
P. Wanken

 

Written in response to Poetic Bloomings Prompt #65: Betrayed!
And posted as Day 18 to “100 Days of Summer” on Facebook.

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6 comments

  1. Ooops! Posted this on PB, but I should have put it here: This was an excellent “take” on the PB prompt and it looks like a perfect piece to submit to “4 and 20″, Paula!

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    1. Thanks, Pamela! I appreciate your leaving the response here as well as at PB. ❤

      Thank you for your encouragement…I've submitted only a couple things–a LONG time ago, before I realized how far I still had to go in my writing–and haven't spent much time thinking of doing any more submissions. But thank you, I'll consider checking into "4 and 20."

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    1. Thank you for the hug, my friend! And for your encouragement re: submission, as well. As I mentioned to PSC, I’ve not done much in the way of submitting any of my work — and those I did, I never heard back. I am not sure I’m ready for that! :-\

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