Deep Blue Sea and Me

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DEEP BLUE SEA AND ME

gravity at work
swells of blue
flick tiny droplets
of ocean’s spray

peaceful refrain

the vast sea
triggers humility
as I claim my tiny place
in this world

relishing wonders

plants are uprooted
sand dollars crack
starfish become brittle
chain of life

ebb and flow

2012-07-15
P. Wanken

Inspired by The Sunday Whirl’s Prompt #65: flicks, swells, spray, brittle, gravity, plant, trigger, relishes, chain, crack, humility, refrain, and claim. Also posted for Day 11 at “100 Days of Summer” — click here to go to their Facebook page.

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26 comments

  1. Paula, just lovely. I’m far away from “my” ocean at the moment, so this was most welcomed. I love “the vast sea / triggers humility” – I feel that often at the ocean, and you use “trigger” so well there.

    Richard

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    1. Thank you, Richard. I feel that a lot…standing at the edge of an ocean…looking across a mountain range…or peering from the window of an airplane. I know I’d feel the same if I ever get to the Grand Canyon.

      Paula

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  2. Nicely done Paula. I’ve also thought about the ocean with these words. I love your minimalistic, gentle approach. 🙂

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    1. Thanks, Mark…I appreciate the feedback. Sorry, though, that you didn’t get to go to the beach with the family…here’s hoping for something fabulous to come, to make up for it! 😎

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  3. Wow and WOW!!! ‘the vast sea
    triggers humility
    as I claim my tiny place
    in this world’…well-stated in this gorgeous verse!

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