Last One Out, Close The Door

image prompt — “House” by Anna Ancher

LAST ONE OUT, CLOSE THE DOOR
(a shadorma)

a home is
more than just a house;
yet…leaving
one behind
feels as if a piece of me
has just been severed

2012-05-29
P. Wanken

Inpsired by the image prompt at Margo Roby’s Wordgathering – Tuesday Tryouts.

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17 comments

  1. Very thoughtful. I, too, was intrigued by that painting. I like how you’ve taken that idea of a home being more than a house – and taking it to its logical conclusion when you move out of that house. Lovely.

    Richard

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