When reading Laurie Kolp’s response to Writer’s Island prompt: “threshold”, I was inspired to write a haiku (previously posted as “Knocking at the Door”) as a response to her poem. Here is Laurie’s acrostic poem: At the Threshold, followed by my haiku.
Try to walk alone, bigshot
Hands in pocket, head high
Random thoughts of another
Each one with a sly motive
Slanderous gossip slithers
Heavenward– tempers reach
Open flames they burn, too
Leaving scars on self-will
Don’t slam the door on God
He stands at the door
He doesn’t force His way in
He waits patiently
2011-06-18 / L. Kolp & P. Wanken
Paula~ I love this! Together, ours would make an awesome piece!
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Indeed! 🙂
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I’ve merged the two…it works!! 🙂
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A lovely and gentle portrait. Very comforting. Nice job.
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Thanks, Gordon! 🙂
By the way…your comment from my original post “Knocking at the Door” carried over to the newly-merged poem…
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That’s awesome, Paula! Thanks!
Here’s the link to my blog post with our piece. = )
http://lkharris-kolp.blogspot.com/2011/06/at-threshold-part-ii.html
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nicely done….thanks for sharing your words
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Thanks, Wayne!
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