Before I Was Even A Thought (a PiKu)   9 comments

BEFORE I WAS EVEN A THOUGHT (a PiKu)

man on a
cross
died in my place

2012-04-05
P. Wanken

Written for Poetic Asides 2012 PAD Challenge Day 5: write a “before my time” poem.

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9 responses to Before I Was Even A Thought (a PiKu)

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  1. Good to remember, this time of year. I posted an Easterish piece, too, over at Scrambled, Not Fried.

    • Oh dear, I left a comment over there early this morning via my phone. Perhaps it didn’t “stick.” I’ll swing back by…

      Thanks for your visit, here. Your support encourages me.

      PW

  2. Wonderful.

  3. Beautifully concise and heartfelt

    Patricia

    • Thank you, Patricia. Someone challenged me to try to write about “all that came before me” in a piku…this was the answer to that challenge. :)

  4. That leaves me speechless.
    So much the work of the Spirit.

    Patricia

  5. Oh the depth of these words my friend! Timely reminder :)

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